Do you think it is a good idea for young people to start their own companies.
I think starting a company is a very attractive idea for young people because you can start a company that utilizes your hobby and, unlike working for a company, you can work as much time as you want, whenever you want. However, there are conditions. Generally speaking, young people tend to make poor decisions when it comes to running a company because they lack experience compared to adults. Therefore, I think it is best to hold off on running a company until you have gained enough experience in the real world and understand the realities of business. Also, if you fail to run your company, you could end up with a large amount of debt and your relationships with others could be damaged, so I think careful consideration is required.
自分の趣味を生かした会社を作ったり、会社勤めとは違い、好きな時に好きなだけ時間を利用して働くことができるので、若者が会社を立ち上げることはたいへん魅力的ことだと思います。ただし、条件があります。一般的に若者は大人に比べて経験値が足りないため会社経営において判断を誤りがちです。ですから実社会で十分な経験を積みビジネスの実態を把握するまでは会社経営を控えた方が無難だと思います。また、会社経営を失敗すると多額の借金を抱えたり、人間関係にも支障が出てくることも考えられますから慎重な検討が必要だと思います。
when it comes to ～ ～に関して言えば ～には名詞が入るので動詞の場合は動名詞
hold off = put off ≒refrain from 延ばす、控える
end up with ～ ～というまずい状態に落ち込む
consideration=deliberation 思慮、熟考
be required=be necessary 必要である